Tell me, if I swear to be honest -
Honestly, would you promise to be kind?
Empty space between us -
Eternity, and so much to find
Moving closer to me
Put your hand in mine
Trace my fingers with yours
Yet they'll never intertwine
Softly, try to close the space
Perhaps it wasn't meant to be
After all of our movement
Couldn't quite bridge the empty
Endeavor to be oblivious -
Bottle up your pain
Echo back the overused phrases -
There's only rainbows after rain . . .
We'll never bridge the space between us
Emptiness will forever separate
Enjoyed fooling myself for awhile
Nonsensical notions we fabricate
Unchallenged and inevitable -
See the space between us accumulate
~
The Empty Space Accumulated
Honestly, would you promise to be kind?
Empty space between us -
Eternity, and so much to find
Moving closer to me
Put your hand in mine
Trace my fingers with yours
Yet they'll never intertwine
Softly, try to close the space
Perhaps it wasn't meant to be
After all of our movement
Couldn't quite bridge the empty
Endeavor to be oblivious -
Bottle up your pain
Echo back the overused phrases -
There's only rainbows after rain . . .
We'll never bridge the space between us
Emptiness will forever separate
Enjoyed fooling myself for awhile
Nonsensical notions we fabricate
Unchallenged and inevitable -
See the space between us accumulate
~
The Empty Space Accumulated
I've given up on coming up with rhymes
ReplyDeleteMuch better to stay in touch
Because your poems deserve attention
And I simply
Cant
Keep up
I wrote a poem for your last poem
crumpled it and threw away
If I find it I might send it
But trust me its rather lame
Trust you? Doubtful
DeleteThough I'll not flatter and disagree -
Perhaps it truly isn't good
Though I tend to like what you write for me
Consider: I never asked you to keep up -
You're the one who started this game
After all this time, shall you cry forfeit?
Now THAT I may call lame
Is it possible to be bold and insecure
DeleteYou have given up but maybe your motivation will come back this summer
Give her attention she deserves it you dont need to be good at it
You should search for that poem
Make sure it isnt stolen
It isnt about your quality for this
It's about your intentions
Honestly jam sparks you should just keep trying. I dont know try writing random stuff till your inspiration sparks.